Tell-Me Outdoor Adventures: Falling into Savings

Friday, November 4, 2016

Falling into Savings

We are have a flash sale starting November 7th we will be discounting our retreat packages by 50%. Tell’ Me Outdoor Adventures is a premier destination for businesses looking to team build and add value to their employees. This is our first year in the industry and we have already helped over 40 businesses. With each business that passes though our door it is a new challenge that we proudly take on. The proof is in the pudding here, we have testimonies upon testimonies of the benefits that have came from our resort.

We are always looking for more businesses to help with this sale now is the opportunity to take advantage of. Businesses have left our resort and seen immediate improvements. Not only in profits but, in performance. You might find yourself asking why would I need help? Have you spend days wondering why your team just can’t get along? Have you considered it could be solved in one week. That is it one week of your time and you will have team mesh and work together like never before.

What we want to know is what we would have to do to get you to resort? If slashing our prices is not enough what is? Please contact us at info@tmoa.com for any further questions or to book a reservation.

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2 comments:

AnonymousNovember 7, 2016 at 12:08 PM
I like your picture and headline! You forgot to add a link. I think putting a creative caption would of added a little more "flavor" to this post. Overall, you have a great sale idea and followed the 2-3 paragraph requirement. This sentence :"We are always looking for more businesses to help with this sale now is the opportunity to take advantage of." was a little confusing.
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Laurie BoettcherNovember 13, 2016 at 3:10 PM
The theme was Fall Harvest, not a sale. Too many sales and stating that you are always looking for new business makes you appear desperate. I would love for you to go truly indepth on a topic rather than flirt around an idea.
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Hello, my name is Telly.

A little background about me I am from the insane world of high strung business professional. Living in a pressure cooker of dead lines was my life. When something important happened to me. I got a chance to take a sabbatical when I came back to work I was more refreshed than ever.

This got me thinking how important it is as a team to take time outside of work and bond. The office moral was higher then ever. We crushed our number and hit our deadlines faster.

Tell'Me Outdoor Adventures caters to all businesses large and small. Our resort is upscale but, still affordable. We are open to any group of working professional international or domestic. Feel free to bring your family children 13 and older are more than welcome to join. They must have waiver signed and parent present.